Surrender

by Spoken Silence   Apr 11, 2006


Erase our steps as if they never existed
Beat the path our journey smoothed out
Dismiss our past in hopes to salvage our future.
I love you but i can't so lets become strangers
take back the innocence stolen by a tainted kiss
make it the only way it was always meant to be
forget the lies and take apart the puzzle
unspeak secrets and unmake promises
rewind time, go back through the land of ignorance and lead me to reason
Not all fairy tales have happy endings so lets make this our story that never ends
Lets salute to the world and take whats ours,
I'm not willing to surrender.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love this - can certainly relate to it

  • 11 years ago

    by MizzCici

    Diz was really good! i really liked it! check mine out nd comment plz!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    I loved every part of this, my favourite line was
    ~'I love you but i can't so lets become strangers' ~
    it's quite similiar to how I write. I liked the simple way you expressed your ideas here and how honest it all sounds. Very nice work :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah Davis

    OH MY GOD!!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!! I have felt this wya about someone before. BRAVO!! ^_^

    ~Sarah~