Oh woman so beautiful, oh woman so vain
The sun has set upon the horizon, and everything remains the same
The trees have shaved their unwanted leaves, and yet nothing has changed
A blanket of snow begins to cover the city
And the flowers being to reach for the skies
And yet, you still plan to go on with it
Do you really believe that this decision will set you free?
For it will just create the chains that will live forever inside of thee
Im so close to daylight, and yet so far away
I dream of the chance my voice wills be heard, I pray
If not for yourself, then do this for me
Give me a chance, because you are my key
Break down the wall that you placed before me
I hope to have a future, and let my eyes daylight see
Is it too much to ask, to see the colors of the rainbow arch upon the sky?
To feel a raindrop touch my skin, to be able to cry
Is it too much to ask, to take a breath and feel the crisp air?
To take a scent of the roses, to have someone who cares
Is it too much to ask, to be able to imagine, to be able to dream?
Take to the sky, soar very high, and see what I havent seen
Is it too much to ask, to be able to love, to be able to hate
To feel, let my emotions run wild, to decide my own fate
Is it too much to ask to laugh and be able to smile?
To experience joy, feel happiness within my soul, find out why life is worthwhile
Is it too much to ask, to fight for myself and lead my own path
I dont want to trace footsteps, I want to create my own, create my own wrath
Whatever you decide, you know that it is ultimately up to you
A flower so delicate can turn my sun into a darkening moon
Free me from this cage and allow me to see the sky so blue
Is it too much to ask to be able to see your face soon?
*If you havent figured it out, this poem is about abortion.. how did you interpret it, poetry is all about interpretation... let me know*
It came off where it could be taken for many other meanings and not just the one you portrayed. Nice flow and words with the imagery of the metaphors. Really it had been something good but not exactly one that I was interested in during the middle. Strong beginning and ending.
My goodness!YES YES YES! I did know this was a baby talking to its mother.A wonderful poem. I have only just discovered your writing. I will be reading much more. You are a very talented writer. If you are interested I have written two about abortion."Is This What God Has Willed" and "Situational Ethics"
Great poem. very nice penned
i liked it very much, you are such a talent writer
if you can then check my poems too and write comments plz i want to know how my writing is, and what i change
what is good and bad