Crawl

by The Poetic Child   Apr 27, 2006


Talking to me like its cool
How could you be so Relaxed
Feeling like nothing but a mule...
Love, thats what lacks

You seem like it was great
But really what did you feel
Every time we went on a date
Our love grew more real

But thats what i felt
You felt.....Lord knows
you've my heard melt
everyone knows and it shows

but after you made it melt
You took it up and stabbed it
Us-to make me feel like i never felt
just took my heart and grabbed it

I felt so Good with you
You were my Perfect Girl
The perfect one for me
You made this a perfect world

I considered myself lucky
To even have been with a girl like you
But now i feel like I'm nothing
cause you felt nothing true

you've literally splattered my heart
Everywhere against the wall
And I'm here on the ground
while you just watch me crawl

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Aww is this about ur ex or katie?? this is so touching....WOW. I love it..keep it up.

    thnxs Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Ouch that was very sad you okay man i hope your alright but amazing poem
    cant wait for more
    Take care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Another sad yet great write...love the work! sorry it has to be soo sad...=\
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Don't even try to play like that babe. i don't sit and watch you crawl. stop writing poems like this please. it makes me depressed.