Until I heard her voice

by David Marshall   May 2, 2006


I felt so happy,
Until I heard her voice.
It brings back memories.
It brings back pain.
All I hear is rejection.
All I feel is rejection.
All I fear is rejection.
I hear her voice,
and I'm afraid to love again.
The world's against me.
All hope is pushed back.
Sorrow overflowing.
I can't balance my heart any more.
Her pride overthrows her feelings.
leaving me to my own.
She attempts to prove to me in words,
and fails with a sense of pride still left,
and a tear in my eye with a broken heart.
These feelings are released with no where to go.
I'm rejected and replaced with pride.
From the soul who can not control their decisions.
I'm left shattered and un attended to..
Not enough faith to live on.
When you look to the sky, you hope to find stars.
When you look to the ocean, you hope to see fish.
When you look for a forest, you hope to find trees.
When you look into their heart, you hope to find love.
But once you lose your hope.
you lose your sight,
and love turns to sorrow as sorrow slowly ends your fate.
The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.
I felt so happy,
Until I heard her voice.
Her rejection.

© Copy-righted by David A Marshall

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  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    Cant say anything... speechless... I loved it.. not much more to say

    Love Always
    ~Casey J

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Thankz for participating in my contest!

  • 17 years ago

    by +Purple Sky+

    I love the sky/stars-heart/love verses.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah...that was amazing! i can totally relate to how this feel, except with guys. anyway, wow this is super amazing! 5/5 congrats on gettin 1st in my contest

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow david I love this poem, the end could use a little more but my favorite part was ...

    When you look to the sky, you hope to find stars.
    When you look to the ocean, you hope to see fish.
    When you look for a forest, you hope to find trees.
    When you look into their heart, you hope to find love.
    But once you lose your hope.
    you lose your sight,
    and love turns to sorrow as sorrow slowly ends your fate.
    The stars are gone,
    The trees die.
    The fish disappear,
    and you still can't cry.

    ....pretty much all of that! but that was everyones favorite part lol, see these are my kind of favorite poems and not the rhyming ones because those make me feel like Im in kindergarten! lol well keep up the big work big bro.