This girl

by Nelle   May 4, 2006


There was once this girl,
a girl so confused with life,
a girl who felt so helpless,
She wondered if she would ever find her way in this world,
if she would ever be loved the way she loved others...
she wondered what would happen
if one day, everybody woke up and found out that she had done it, that she had finally killed herself.
She wonders what this world would be like, with her not around,
Would anyone notice?
Would anyone care?
Would anyone take the time and go to her funeral?
Or, would anyone even care enough to give her a funeral.
The pain is gut wrenching
The tears, are endless
The cutting is worse..every minute,every day, every week.
She looks in the mirror,
she starts to cry...
For once she realized this girl, the girl that is looking back at her...
she knows her very well,
she used to think it was an image of something that was never there,
But, now she sees
it's been her the whole time..
I know this girl very well,
I know she wants to die every day
I know she wants to let her blood flow until there is none left..
I know, how she feels...
This girl is, Me!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shelly

    I have read all of yours poems and they are so good!!wheni read read this one it made me cry coz it reminded me so much of me!!i know what your going through and i know how much your hurting...if you ever wanna talk i'd be happy to even though you dont know me but still!!

  • 17 years ago

    by x0xShaggys-Lovely-Little-Tinkerbellx0x

    I wish I could help even though I know little about you. I want to help because I am a mere image of this girl you speak of. I was once happy about who I am but now I'm not, and I never want anyone to feel the way I do about anything.

    x0xMuch-Lovezx0x
    Danie

  • 17 years ago

    by Hide the bong Jesus is coming

    Holy shit! awesome poem. i fell like that every day of my life, and it makes me feel good when i know that there are others like myself out there living with the same Difficulties in life. but are still trying to live through them as i am myself. your poem is Extremely well Written. you also have a great Talent with how you express yourself through writing... great job! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Sad..but i loved the meaning of it..nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Nelle, sweetie, that was a great write! Many emotions, and awesome descriptions. But see, people care about you and love you, look at all those comments. Miss Popular. :) Great work.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

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