The One

by The Queen of Spades   May 8, 2006


Crowded room,
Filled with nothing
But you, only you
Catch your gaze
Oh, your eyes
Burning ever so bright
Turn away
As blush creeps in
Magnetic field
Takes me out of body
CLose to yours
The inaudible fragrance
Of sweat and honey
Draws me in
I'm captivated
The earth is so full, but
There's only you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    I thought this poem was really cool. The description is really strong and the sharp line breaks give it a really powerfull flow. By keeping the poem snappy and the language uncomplicated you ensure that the poem's strength isn't ebbed away by a lack of rhythm. Really great write, 5/5 x

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