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by The Queen of Spades Oct 4, 2012
Nature, environment /
Under a blue sun
Living water crashes down
Dancing in white foam
When the moon awakes
Rainbow of hues greet the sky
Wonder fills the night
And during it all
A thousand eyes stand in awe
by Hannah Lizette
This is a very refreshing triple haiku. It's amazing how much imagery can come out of these little forms.
I haven't heard of the expression "under a blue sun" so that's unique and that's always something to admire.
I'm not too fond of the "mem'ries" but I'm pretty sure you done it for the syllable count. At first I thought it might have been a typo until I started counting syllables, lol.
Overall, I love it. Very serene and I can definitely picture the Niagara Falls.
I saw niagara through your piece.
Wonderful piece. You served the true meaning of this haiku.
One of the best haikus I read on PnQ(:
So beautiful imagery. I loved you chained haikus.
by The Queen of Spades
by Formidable Muse
I've never heard the term "Under a blue sun" it's cool. This is a beautifully written and soothing haiku.