Niagara [haiku]

by The Queen of Spades   Oct 4, 2012


Under a blue sun
Living water crashes down
Dancing in white foam

When the moon awakes
Rainbow of hues greet the sky
Wonder fills the night

And during it all
A thousand eyes stand in awe
Beloved mem'ries

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  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is a very refreshing triple haiku. It's amazing how much imagery can come out of these little forms.

    I haven't heard of the expression "under a blue sun" so that's unique and that's always something to admire.

    I'm not too fond of the "mem'ries" but I'm pretty sure you done it for the syllable count. At first I thought it might have been a typo until I started counting syllables, lol.

    Overall, I love it. Very serene and I can definitely picture the Niagara Falls.

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    I saw niagara through your piece.
    Wonderful piece. You served the true meaning of this haiku.
    One of the best haikus I read on PnQ(:

  • 6 years ago

    by Khalid

    So beautiful imagery. I loved you chained haikus.

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Thank you!

  • 6 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    I've never heard the term "Under a blue sun" it's cool. This is a beautifully written and soothing haiku.