I'm done

by Nelle   May 8, 2006


I lay in my bed hoping to die
crying these tears swearing i will never lie

The night goes on
my tears become more
my pain is intense
i wish i could walk out the door

The blood flows fast
streaming from my vains
the knife on the ground
hoping to drown

As i say my good bye's
people start to cry
it's time for me to go
it's time for me to die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    I dont feel sorry for you. Only admiration for the fact that you are sharing your experience with others... no one is alone in this world. Someone will always understand and know to an extent how you are feeling. I loved the emotion in this. Great piece!!

    Godbless
    Sammib

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    A deep feeling wrten to this poem if this is a paper i thing it is written by a blood

  • 17 years ago

    by x0xShaggys-Lovely-Little-Tinkerbellx0x

    I'm not quite sure what to say except if you believe in God, he doesn't want to bring you to his home just yet. I know I can't possibly help since I am but a mere aquaintance but if I had any power in my hands, I would.

    x0xMuch-Lovezx0x
    Danie

  • 17 years ago

    by JR13

    I gots to say thats a throwed poem its really deep. I gots to add you to my favorites

  • 17 years ago

    by Batman

    NO NELLE I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!

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