ME N MYSELF

by Cyma Khan   May 8, 2006


Here I am
Standing on the sea shore
Searching for answers
Of my own questions
What I want from my life
Sometimes its so difficult
To say what I really want
And I know I will never
Be able to say that
There is fear in my heart
And that is something I really care about
If I tell you what I want and
How I feel
Maybe you laugh or make fun of it
Maybe you don't feel exactly the same
Like I do
So here I'm all alone
Searching for answers
Of my own questions

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  • 17 years ago

    by DAYLON

    Thanks for commentating on my poetry and I like your poems exploring fear and the other one about love I like them keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    This poem is very interesting, although there are some things in the poem which lower it's overal "poetic value" For instance, there are simple spelling mistakes at some points.

    Interesting choice of structure, the more blocked text signifies more of one thought throughout the whole poem, much like a paragraph can only have one thought..not just a bunch of btogrbkijidfjiejf in one.

    Good work, the flow gets cut off a bit though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Unique4eva

    This is really ubber cool however I go all weird when I see spelling mistakes, I'm only 13 but I know I sound like a teacher soz :S Maybe is one word. But other then that I really enjoyed this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenny

    Hey...i know how that feels...im here to talk if u want..
    Jennifer

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is so eloquently put. Wonderful work!

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