Goodbye

by Jordan Smith   May 30, 2006


I've realized now in time, it's time for me to say goodbye. You've changed my life, but only in the worst ways.

Everyday I prayed that you would love me like you did when I was little, that you would hug me like you did when you were sad.

You use to listen to me, you use to laugh with me, what did I mess up in between those times?

I pray one day maybe God will give you the desire to love me because you want to not because it's the mother thing to do.

I want you to hug me and tell me I'm the best thing in your life, but I know that it's time for me to be wise and realize that it's not going to be like it was when I was little, and just say goodbye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Oh sweetie that is so sad. At first I thought it was about a friend but the lines

    to love me because you want to not because it's the mother thing to do.

    really hit hard.
    Very well written. nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by teagan

    I like how you rhyme in every poem

  • 18 years ago

    by gone back to him

    Omg I know exactly how you feel. My mom treated me like a daughter the first 3 years of my life, but then my brother and sister came along and all I was, was a babysitter. She has been treating me this way for 11 years now, but she's trying to change, and all I can tell you is to believe, it can change, but only if you really truly want it too. If you want to, read my poem, "Moms", its alot like yours.

    Hugs-Kisses-and-Peace

    Sabrina Nicole

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