Home is where the pain is.

"A war zone,
Run for cover; hide,
Can't leave the house,
Not safe to stay inside."
^^^
[Between you and me, my dad's a bit abusive. And seriously, though it doesn't speak strongly (there's no emotion at all to me), it still hit home a bit. Because it's so true.
I hate going home because my dad's always yelling about something. I'm always hiding in my room or behind the computer screen. So, yeah, it hit home a bit.]

"Home is where the heart is,
Is written upon the wall,"
^^^
[First you used "is" twice in a row.
But,
I'd use "it's" instead on the second line. Just a suggestion, but it flows better to me.]

I'm sorry this is so short. Normally, I say something about almost every line. But honestly, I really didn't feel the poem. I didn't get any emotion out of it, there wasn't any discripition..
The flow was pretty strong, except for in one place.
I like the idea to this, but none of the poem was strong to me.
Sorry, just being honest.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

I thought it was amazing.
I really did.
It's similar to when I lived with my mum...
Never wanted to be home...
I loved it because I could relate..
5/5
Lovce you. xx
-Heater

Wow, i liked this, and i found it to be true.

"Home is where the heart is,
Is written upon the wall,
The place I said my first words,
The floor on which I did first crawl.
Home is where the pain is,
They made a slight correction,
Home is where the pain is,
Sorrow, Grief and neglect ion."

Your poem was amazing. I think this is my favourite one so far. This stanza was so strong and ended the poem amazingly.

I love love the rhthem here...amazing. keep it up hun. I'm melissa by the way...aka Lissa lol.So like check me out...lol my poems and please comment thnxs. Peace.

Lissa