Slice Dice(a cutters poem)

by LifeThroughMyEyes   Jun 9, 2006


Slice, slice
dice, dice.
oh there,
goes my life.

my wrists are bleeding,
but i don't cry.
cause i,
i just wanna die.

my heart is right,
intact,
and bleeding.

slowing down,
and now its retreating.

i lose my breath,
death's coming now.
why?
how?
how can i do this?

I'm killing myself,
I'm sorry,
I'm lost.
but i need this release,
so just BACK OFF?!?!?!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This is really good. I hope you don't wanna die that much thought becuz it's not only hurting yourself, but also everybody you know and care about. I know this and it's very very painful. It's not fun either. but overall..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow. I hope you never get too serious about cutting. I was on that path once and it was a painful road. Please check out my poem if you get a chance.

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow that was amazing.. i can rele rele relate to it.. ur a great writer.. its jus amazing. great rhyming too. i love it.. keep it up.. 5/5

    ^ angie ^

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    That was good keep working on it e-mail me some of your poems @dishit14@yahoo.com plz thanks keep working on it