Wow luv this poem, its emotional and really gets the point across
i luv the last stanza the most, it stands out 2 me prob cuz thats what i think all the time but yeah
"one day ill get mad.
and ill end it all.
maybe then ull realize,
its you that caused the fall. "
great job, keep up the good work
p.s im adding this poem 2 my favs cuz i just luv it