Eagle -sedoka-

by Rain   Jun 17, 2006


Eagle (humanity/animals)

A single eagle...
Such beauty and elegance...
Symbol of America...

Only it can be
America's pride and joy.
Bold and strong as WE should be.

-a sedoka is a 2 stanza poem with the meter, 5/7/7-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Disaster

    I'm not crazy over Japanese poems, as with Haikus, the simple for is pleasent but it doesnt particularly captive me unless the writer is able to incoorperate some sort of inspirtaional and powerful thought into the few lines the poem entails. A 5 for well written, its a lovely poem, good flow, and the thoughts presented are true. Though the thoughts themselves arent grabbing, or the word's used dont present the power I think your trying to convey. Good job though, i enjoyed it