Unreachable

by Natalie   Jun 21, 2006


The image I portray is only an illusion,
To cover up the truth that I do need attention.
I look fine on the outside but I've disconnected,
I don't believe in anyone that can't be trusted.

I'm unreachable cause I've slowly faded away,
But I can still fool you with what I put on display.
You will never get the key to my inner true self,
I'm locked cause I don't trust you or anybody else.

There's a burning sensation that I have loved to hate,
A feeling of emptiness in me that won't vacate.
I'm trapped inside a depressed circle that has no end,
Each day passes and it does get harder to pretend.

I can hear your voice, it echoes within my mind,
But it's my unanswered questions I'm longing to find.
You won't knock down my walls that I have built around me,
I've become unreachable, lost who I used to be.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice. I have parts of me locked away, hidden from pain. this poem describes that place. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Really a good poem... I liked the second one i read better (sry cannot for the life of me remember the name) but this was good... nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by arunima gautam

    Wow, its a really nice one natalie. keep up the good work. the element of sadness has been portrayed brilliantly. keep in touch. i would need your honest critique too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Constance

    This is a great poem and I understand the emotion behind it .. the emotion that i am getting anyway.

  • 17 years ago

    by Keep it simple stupid!!

    I like the words you used in your poem...that was what i was looking for in the pass few days....finally found sth i want to see...
    i can relate to this poem...thats what i do everyday...walls would never dissapear until i met someone who understands me...
    Nice Work..Its beautiful!!