Untitled (i just cant find one that fits)

by Resplendant Rose   Jun 25, 2006


Standing in the shadows
watching you walk away
down, a silent tear flows
silently hoping you will stay

for without you, i am nothing
so why cant you just see
that you are my everything
only you can set me free

i can tell you hardly care
you just like me cuz im hot
of this i am very aware
but what if i was not?

no one would even notice me
they'd all just walk right by
never seeing my silent plea
completely deaf to my cry

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  • 17 years ago

    by Krissey

    I really liked this poem especially because I could relate to it..along time ago i wrote a poem sorta like this..I hate when guys never see personality and I too wonder well if I wasn't pretty would you still like me? Wonderully written I liked how you released your feelings!!
    Chelsey_lynn

    Could you please read "Reunited to Late?"

  • 17 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Brilliant...I think the tittle should be "Walked Away"...Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Very awesome! kinda left me wanting to know more tho... but thats good, makes you think. well done. as for a title, im not sure id know what to call it either...

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really liked this poem! I can sorta relate. Well actually I can relate a lot. Anyways, the flow and rhyming were good. It held a lot of emotion. For titles, hmm I can't really think of any sorry. Good poem though. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I would name this poem "Deaf and Silent" but hat's just me. I really enjoyed reading this poem... I like it bunches and bunches, ansd I give it a 5/ excellent work.

    ravyn!

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