Should I

by Nelle   Jun 26, 2006


I woke up this morning, crying
How come I am so sad
Are my problems getting the best of me
Or am I really dying

I try to stop thinking about them
And i get pretty far
But how come my tears keep coming
How come I will always fall

I get back up, only to break down
Will this feeling ever leave
My heart feels gone, my body feels empty
Is this really what I'm meant to be

Maybe it's time for me to die
Is this the end of me
Should i take my life, today
Or should i forget about the pain

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  • 17 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Such a sad poem. The pain never seems to go away. But stick it out.

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Great poem Nelle I thought it was awesome there is a lot of emotion in it.......... Please read mine called rose colored glasses........thanks-ann

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I thought it was a good poem.

    You never know when it's your time to die, and we don't have that decision. What we need to do in life, is live. That's it. We die when we die. Just incase you had any ideas, don't do it!!!!.. hope you feel better though, I can tell you are going through some rough stuff *hugs* take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written piece with some well expressed content. It is not too short nor does it drag out making it the perfect length for both expression and the holding of the reader. It is very well written with some very powerful aspects.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT

    Thats a really great poem...sad but great. i relate to this so much..

    *beth*
    -xox-

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