Gods teardrops

by Gizmo   Jun 28, 2006


And the rain was running down the pane,
ands she sat and thought of him again,
the times they cuddled under the moon,
she made a wish for him to come back soon,
for as she watched she knew why,
why the heavens had started to cry,
for every angel up above,
were crying for the loss of her love,
she said god please don't share my pain,
as she watched gods teardrops on the window pane

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Thanks for the comments

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Your have a nice imagination my friend- 'why the heaven has started to cry'- i love your poems

  • 16 years ago

    by more den just a broken smile

    Great poem really great

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Awesome, short and simple with a great message. this had good presentation and pacing which is a big plus, very good

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Awww i never read a poem wich brought god into it the way u did. very well written. 5/5

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