Crying Wine

by David Marshall   Jun 30, 2006


You're depressed, and you're drunk.
You've had too much wine.
You think a few more drinks will do,
and that you'll be fine.

You're weak, and you're dizzy,
and you almost want to cry.
you call her; she's busy,
but you had to try.

You're tired, from all the alcohol,
and you wonder why you live.
You stumble; you fall,
what else is there to give?

You begin to close your eyes,
Drift away; one last tear.
You've had so many tries,
but now death is near.

She calls you back,
but it's already over.
She starts to worry,
your way beyond sober.

She knocks on your door; she knows there's trouble.
She finds you on your bed.
She starts to cry as she picked up a bottle,
because she realizes that your dead.

© Copy-righted by David A Marshall

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwwww this is so sad....but i really like it...good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Amazing, loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    UpDate: You're critique is done, thank you for entering.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    FOOL!! - Do you realise the havok and evils you have unleashed!?!?! You made a spelling error, it's you're* not your. :)
    Anywho, good poem, you do have a wee bit of drinking habit laddie boy. But it's better than curling up into a ball every night and well wishing you had alcohol like I do.

  • Hey, i LOVE all the poems you write they're great but sad....happy 4th of july.dont do nuttin dumb ur like a brother to me and i dont wanna loose you over........sumthin like that k luv ya bunches-hugs n kisses