Birthdays!

by Kirsty palmer   Jul 4, 2006


Another year older
And what can I say
Other than I love you
On your special day

Always remember
That Im thinking of you
Not just on your birthday
But every other day too

So I wrote you this poem
And gave you my heart
To show that you mean the world
To me, every part

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    You are truly an artist with words. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This was really sweet. A little short and simplistic but it had a lovely feel-good factor about it and was clearly from the heart.
    Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Kirsty --
    This poem seemed more thought out to me. There weren`t a bunch of '!' points. I had to glance through a couple of your poems until I found one that wasn`t full of '!'. That`s just not good for ALL of your poems ;; keep that in mind.
    The flow of this poem worked out really well. I think that you could have done better on this -- the rhymes were VERY simple, and it was really predictable. But overall, you did a nice job. 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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