Thunderstorm

by nikki   Jul 6, 2006


The crack of lightening,
The boom of thunder,
The whisper of wind,
The crackle of leaves.

The pounding of rain on my window,
Lures me to sleep,
Bright flashes of lightening,
Wake me in a cold sweat.

I look out my window,
I see swaying trees,
Waving hello or maybe goodbye,
The sight of rain catches my eyes.

I look up and see the blackest sky,
I've ever seen,
Lightening catches my eyes,
Then I see a spark of fire.

Fire quickly gathers around me,
I'm trapped in the blazing heat,
I think I'm going to die then i realize,
I've let my imagination run away again.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow great job of turning the poem into something more than just observing nature that made it really unique and memorable b/c not many people do that
    great description and incorporation of literary elements 5/5 !

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    I love it very well written I love the theme
    5/5

    God Bless

    -Chris

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent first stanza. I think you can make it better by rewriting the last two stanza so it's just "nature"

  • 17 years ago

    by TheSickness

    I enjoyed reading this one
    ^^
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Nikki --
    Overall, this was a good poem. It held a lot of detail and imagery, which is good. But the flow wasn`t steady, and that kind of messed me up. But otherwise, it was good. 4/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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