Strange Feeling

by nikki   Oct 14, 2006


I don't know this feeling,
Something strange and unusual,
What could it be?
What could I be experiencing?
I'm pretty sure this is a good feeling,
But what is it?
I seem to be getting this feeling a lot now a days,
Maybe this feeling is sadness,
No, I've known that feeling,
Maybe its anger,
No, I've felt that too,
What could it be?
I'm not quiet sure what this feeling is,
It's so different from me,
I know exactly what this feeling is,
This feeling is a GREAT feeling,
This is a feeling I enjoy,
This feeling is happiness

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Good poem.It had a couple spelling mistakes and the flow was a little off,but great meaning.And it showed a little bit of emotion,not a lot though.I give it a 4/5 for a good effort and a great meaning.Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Good poem! The flow could use some work, and in the third and fourth lines, they are too close in wording to each other... All in all, awesome job and keep up the great work!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hehe, that was cute. I like the way you kept guessing in the poem, made us anticipate the answer more! Good job! :) 5/5 Loved it! Keep it up!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I like it . A couple typos, but it`s kcoo .
    It has nice meaning to it .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    One typo-- it's nowadays, not 'now a days'.
    Other than that, this is a good poem. Good meaning, good flow, could have better word choice, but that's ok. The meaning is clearly shown-- 5/5.

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