Prince for Princess

I really like this poem !
It's simple, but emotional !
Keep up!
Please read my poem!

This is a delightful parody of Romeo and Juliet with a personal passion that makes the poem cute and also deeply romantic

well done 5>>>>>>>>>>>

I love the repetition.. Very unique write. You have some minor puncuation issues but that's about all.. Nice job.

Do I stay your Nikki,
Or does she become your princess?
Should I be selfish,
or should you?

such and ironic verse it caught my attention so much i loved the way you worded it ! great job
i hope he picked you : ) 5/5

"Your my Romeo,"
`You're

"the prince I've been waiting for,
My dream come true,
My one true love."
`I found this really plain, non-original, cliche... spice it up maybe?

"Shes your Juliet,"
`She's

"The princess you've been waiting for,
Your dream come true,
Your one true love."
`I guess I kind of like how you kept it the same just changed it to princess.

"Or become her Chris?"
`Who is Chris...?

Overall, a really cliche poem.. needs some improvement. Make it more original, otherwise its not a really enjoyable read at all. Sorry. 4/5