No

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jul 7, 2006


I'm sorry,

For everything I've done

And everything I'll do...

But nothing will ever change

The way you make me feel.

I know

I messed up,

I've done it all before,

But i promise

I'll change my ways.

I know

You've heard it all before

But im not her

Guess its true

Good things never last.

Happy...

Its just one big lie

Why regret

What you've done

When its what

You didnt do

that caused the problem...

Like saying

No

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  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    A bit patchy, the flow is not so good, its a tad too broken up, i think it would eb better if some of the lines were put together so they're longer. also the spacing thing again...

    -biscuit-

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another good poem, No is a very strong word, which you showed here, well done
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I like this.. It's different and has an interesting flow to it..

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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