You're My Everything, My World[song]

by BlueEyedMystery   Jul 9, 2006


You're My Everything, My World

[verse]
The phone rang,
I heard your voice,
You said sorry,
But I have to go,
I won't be back,
We're through.

[chorus]
Now that you're gone,
All I ever think about is you,
I wish I could go back,
And be everything you ever wanted,
You're my everything,
My world.

[verse]
I saw you today,
You were holding her hand,
I will admit shes pretty,
I hope she breaks your heart,
The way you did mine,
I hope you feel the pain I do.

[chorus]
Now that you're gone,
All I ever think about is you,
I wish I could go back,
And be everything you ever wanted,
You're my everything,
My world.

[verse]
Now I'm on the road,
Just singing these sad songs,
About we loved and lost,
I miss you so much,
I just dont know what to do,
And yes I still love you.

[chorus]
Now that you're gone,
All I ever think about is you,
I wish I could go back,
And be everything you ever wanted,
You're my everything,
My world.

[I wrote this with my friend]

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    I really cried when i read this song!!

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Chorus was really good...i didnt know the melody of the song so i couldnt really picture it in all its glory but even from what i read...it wowed me...keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Cayce -
    This was really good! I kind of started singing it out loud ;; the rhyming was nice. Maybe it was just the way I was singing it, but the flow was a little disproportional. I gave it a 4/5 beacause it was kind of simple ;; but it was still pretty good. =D

    love ya
    hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    Great job!! I especially liked the stanza that says 'I hope she breaks your heart, like you did mine' Its nice to hear some honest emotions!! On the last verse did you mean to write 'About HOW we loved and lost'?
    Great job!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Another great write... Emotional and heartfelt. Sorry to read about your sad story... hang in there... tomorrow is a better day. Beautifully written though. 5/5

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