Dear Cutter...

by Lying To Live   Jul 17, 2006


Dear Cutter

You may think it is stupid
Till you try it for yourself
Cutting your own flesh
Can be such help

I will be here for you
When no one else is there
Forget your friends and family
Im the only one who cares

Ill take away your misery
I can wipe away your tears
Help you release all those memories
You stored up over the years

You wont need to talk about it
All you will need is me
When you feel everything is trapping you
I can set you free

So forever I will help you
I will always be your friend
Helping you through all the pain
Till the very end

Love Razor Blade XoX

P.S Try not to tell our secret
Its only ours to know
You will be so much better off
If your cuts you do not show

....thanx for reading ... this poem goes with my other poem Dear Razorblade ....

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    OMG this is so good! WOW...well done! I luv u heaps and will alwayz b here for you ok!

    Luv ya x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Okay, wow. I feel stupid. I change my comment earlier. I didn't realize that the poem was about the razor blade writing to the cutter... I feel really stupid... Sorry about that. Now it makes more sense as to why it's so forced.

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    "Ill take away your misery
    I can wipe away your tears
    Help you release all those memories
    You stored up over the years"

    That was my favorite stanza. I liked the way you wrote this. A letter like poem. I like those kinds of poems. I write some like that. Anyway, I give this poem an overall rating of 4/5. Most of your rhymes were good, but yourself and help don't really rhyme. Other than that, the flow was good.

    The one thing I didn't really like about this poem (didn't affect rating at all) is that you were basically telling people that you were the only one who understood and would be there for them. I don't know if this was just an indirect poem, that you were just writing "just because" or if you really wanted to convey that you are there.

    If it was that you wanted to convey that you were there for the people who cut, then I think that you should've gone about it a bit differently. Maybe like not so much that you are the ONLY one kind of thing.. I dunno...

    It was a good poem anyway. It just kinda felt like you were forcing yourself on to the people who cut (sorry just being honest)

    ~BJ~

  • 17 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    I really liked it. keep up the good work

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