Im fine

by The Poetic Child   Jul 25, 2006


Broken and torn apart
feelings of something restless
keeping me up at night
leaving me breathless

ripped out my wings
that you flew beneath
every aching part grew
as i grinned my teeth

her heart pounded me
gave me a certain abuse
abducting my mind
to feel theres no use

such purity and Divine
something i found
in the heart of a liar
depression was bound

but now I'm back on my feet
my soul is brushed clean new
search through the mind
find no thoughts of you

I'm lifted back on my legs
every part of my body is dry
the tears have all disappeared
no longer a reason to cry

Inspiration in this dedication
I'm finally come to realize
not to believe everything
every pack has some lies

lessons slammed in my head
memorizing every quote and line
that i can live and go on
without you.....still I'm fine..

* Dedication- Dedicated to those you have been broken and hurt, let it be, you can still get back on your feet, Love doesnt care about time, but dont let time get in your way, we have the strength to get back up and move on.Only if you choose.

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  • 17 years ago

    by kyliecat009

    Nice imagry

  • 17 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    Such purity and Divine
    something i found
    in the heart of a liar
    depression was bound

    WHat a beautiful line.
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    This poem is so beautiful! I loved it, especially this stanza:

    but now I'm back on my feet
    my soul is brushed clean new
    search through the mind
    find no thoughts of you

    Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Broken and torn apart
    feelings of something restless
    keeping me up at night
    leaving me breathless

    This stanza and

    but now I'm back on my feet
    my soul is brushed clean new
    search through the mind
    find no thoughts of you

    were sooo good, i loved each of those lines.
    Amazing Poem!
    It is perfectly written!5/5
    Keep up the beautiful work!