Goodbye my sissy

by Nelle   Jul 27, 2006


Well sissy, I no longer have you in my life.
I don't know what I'm going to do with out you
The only thing I want to do is die
Without you here, without your touch I don't know what to do

We have been through alot this past year
But, we stuck by each other's side and made it out alive
What am I going to do with out you here to wipe my tears
I will try my hardest to survive

I am going to miss hearing, " I love you, Issi"
I am going to miss you holding my hand when times get rough
Or all the times you would say " we can get through this, Missy"
This is the first thing in about a month that has been so tough

I will try my hardest to be okay for you
I will do my best to do the things that you taught me
All the things you told me, I will do
All the ways you want me to be, I will be

Sissy, you will always be in my heart
I will love you forever until I die
I will always think of you when I'm going to fall apart
I will miss you more then ever, because now you are out of my life

( I will always love you, sissy..That is a promise..Don't forget..." We don't try we Succeed" I will do it for you)

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwwwwww....thts sad....i lik it....it had a good flow...

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel

    Awwwwww that was really touching, I don't have a sister but a brother who I look up to in that way and it reminded me of him. I loved the 'We dont try we suceed'

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Great job. Good luck :)

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I like this poem, but some of the lines seemed to go on forever. It had great emotion, I just think if you made some of the lines shorter, and more stanzas, there would be better flow. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Yeah, it indeed seemed like some rhymes were forced. I think you should cut down some of the words in certain lines too. But you did pour a lot of emotion into this poem. Like all of yours. That is something that I haven't been able to do. Awesome stuff.

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