I am done
by Nelle Jul 28, 2006
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I am done trying to make it work with you |
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17 years ago
by Natalie
You got to the point and I liked that. I remember writing something like this when I first started writing, but it went "I'm sorry...blah blah blah" ..but I think I deleted it ages ago. I loved this though, T'was angry and sad, and had so much emotion in it. Keep it up, and smile. 5/5
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17 years ago
by Lacey Rose
Nelle hun it dont deserve u n yeah idk babe i love u soo much i would never wanna lose u
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17 years ago
I ToTaLLy LoVe uR PoeM....patti
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17 years ago
Ooh feel the hate. You certainly get your point across. Although there is a lot of repeatition it works well and is just long enough not to become tedious.
Great job as ever.
