Looking For Love

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 3, 2006


Baby girl do your thing,
Let love guide your way,
Baby girl just be careful
That you, arn't led astray.

For love is complicated,
In which no one understands,
Its a deadly virus baby girl
So don\'t jump at it with all hands.

Look outside your window,
See couples everywhere,
Baby girl just you make sure,
That the one you love really cares.

Baby girl there are bois,
Who will need you for their EGO,
Dig deep and you will find,
That these bois are the feeble.

Take your time with love
For if true it will never end,
Find a boi of wisdom girl,
One who shan\'t pretend.

Some bois treat girls like objects
Objects of desire,
Pick a boi of power, knowledge,
One who is not a liar.

For once you fall in love,
It will never leave your side.
But to be able to make your mistakes,
First you have to try.

So baby girl do your thing,
Let love guide your way.
But baby girl be careful,
That you arn't lead astray.

If you have read this please criticize and tell how to improve thnx xxxx Alex xxxx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    I dont think u can improve its really good very insperational :)

    ashleigh

  • 17 years ago

    by Gordon Whittaker

    Hey, like your style, you certainly have a way with words.
    Like the rest of the comments I cannot see how you can improve this good work.

    Keep them coming of the pen ... and I for one will keep reading them.

    Success........................ Gor

  • 17 years ago

    by _venki

    This poem is really awesome. I feel all girls should think this way before they commit with any guy. Good Job done. keep up the good work. Cheers...
    Venki....:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    I like this poem too its pretty cool.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I honestly cant think of way that you could improve that. its fantastic. definately good advice, all so true. keep up the great work.
    Tammie