X special not special needs x

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 3, 2006


A strange unique world,
Full of nonsense and fun,
An autistic boy,
Amazed by everyone,

An adorer of life,
Never neglecting one thing,
people fighting around him,
While he happily sings.

This boy is amazing,
With incredible knowledge,
At the age of ten,
Brighter than some at college.

This boy is my brother
And forever hell be,
He is the only person i talk to,
Because he understands me.

I feel as if were all special needs,
And he is a normal boy,
Completely level headed,
With life he don't toy.

He captures every moment
And lives life to the full,
There is nothing about Daniel
Id change at all.

for my baby boi Danny xxx

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw such a sweet poem. I really enjoyed this it brightened up my day. Just because someone has special needs doesn't mean that they can't make something of themselves. I hate labels and this poem
    helped to shatter some of the ones that people have already created. I just wish
    that more people were able to see things the way that you do. Maybe eventually the world will see things in this light instead of judging people for their differences.
    I have just a few spelling corrections, stanza four Hell should be he'll. I also think that the last stanza needs a little bit of work. I really liked the message that you were trying to send with it but the line "and lives life to the full" doesn't really sound righ to me. Sweet poem and I hope that Danny knows how much he is loved because I can tell how much just by reading this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Loved the flow within this poem, great job. You have a way with words, excellent work and keep it comming.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is really sweet and has a great meaning behind it.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    This poem made me smile-- and that's saying something! I really love the meaning, and you captured the true nature of people with autism excellently.

    5/5 definitely

  • 17 years ago

    by ! CLAIREEE.

    Awww ... this is soo cute !! and very deptful. i loved it. the flow was great... and it rhymed perfectly. you a wonderful poet. keep up the good work !!

    .Much Love. .Take Care.

    [Claire Louise !!] x o x o