Red Red Rose

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 4, 2006


Amazingly beautiful red red rose,
Tell me how your garden grows.

For if i were that beautiful,
I would make the world see,
That a beautiful destiny
awaits for me.

So breath takingly nice blue blue sky,
How on earth do you stay up high?

For if i wee breath taking,
Id feel great all of the time,
With a boost full of confidence,
Id make that man mine.

For incredible true green green trees,
How come you have such beautiful leaves?

For if i were that incredible,
Then HE would love me true
And when id tell him that i love him,
He'd say ' I love you too '.

My strong unique baby baby boi,
Why mess with my life,why do you toy?

For if i were that strong
I would leave you because you cheat,
But because you are my baby boi,
Ill still fall at your feet.

please comment if you have read this is unusual for me xxx

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    This is a nice poem. i like the flow of it. I hope you keep writting... please comment my poems and rate them thanks!~DARK~

  • 17 years ago

    by xXSomeoneLoveMeXx

    This is a nice poem. i like the flow of it. I hope you keep writting... please comment my poems and rate them thanks!~DARK~

  • 17 years ago

    by VivVanilla

    Unusual yah..

    It sounds a wee bit a nursery rhyme, but nothing like that..its..the nursery rhyme for adults..

    If u know "The Little Prince", its something like that..A fairytale for adults..

    Unusual..yeah..exactly.

    but Good. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Elise

    I really liked it, it had a lot of feeling to it. It was very different but good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    This poem is really cool.
    thanks for the comment.
    hope to read from u again soon.