X beautiful boy x

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 6, 2006


Beautiful boy why do you cry?
When your my world my heart my soul,
Is it because you have done wrong boy,
And now in my heart lies a hole.

Beautiful boy, yes you did hurt me,
With your evil twisted lies,
But beautiful boy how can i not forgive,
Someone with such beautiful eyes.

I feel like a candle beautiful boy,
And were both burning at each end,
soon or later well burn right out,
and then that will be our end.

But beautiful boy even tho your not trusted,
i cherish the ground in which you walk,
I love you with all my heart boy,
But I'm afraid I'm going to walk.....

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  • 17 years ago

    by lOVER

    I love how you put the third stanza(paragraph)
    it's amazing.
    i enjoy reading your poems ;)
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Holly

    Wicked good job i liked it...the vocab was fine cept i spell all my words correctly too but it wasn't hard to read. Nice work though

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wasn't to sure about the voab and that made it uneasy to read especially the repeatition. It felt sad to read really and personally I would change the words (boi-boy) but that could be me. Otherwise it was good.