Fairytale Love

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 8, 2006


Once upon a time,
Whilst i lay asleep,
An angel fell out of the sky,
And lay down next to me.

My prince charming,
Kissed myself awake,
Took me away for a while,
Gave my hurt heart a break.

When they got back,
He expressed his strong love,
They got married the next week,
Where momma released 2 doves.

They settled down in a house,
Where they had a precious child,
The child grew noble like his father,
their perfect life sailed.

Their family is no less than perfect,
With fun, joy, love and laughter,
And as you probably guessed,
they all lived happily ever after.

XXXXXXXxxxxxXXXXXX i didn't really like this just spare of the moment let me know what you think anyways xxx Alex xxx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    I love it..i like how u wrote it like a story....very well written...keep up the good work

    Definate 5/5

    by the way i put up another poem

    Em

  • 17 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I think this is the poem from my contest not sure but commenting anyways i like it, it could be a little longer and the flow is slightly off in my opinion but it is still a good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This is a mad as poem i love it keep it up ur really really good at it!!

    Luv -=3mz=-

  • 17 years ago

    by Misz Luving You

    Great poem i loved the fairytale theme it great 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by unnoticedXlove

    Well even though you dont like it... i do lol. good job keep writing

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