Numb

I REALLY loved the phrases you used in here. Especially about ice dripping off your wings....amazing! I think you're extremely talented. And I saw a comment you gave someone else about rhyming and I totally agreed with you...I think your rhyme scheme was great so keep it up! 5/5!
~Jules

This is a beautifully melancholy and sad poem(as many I write, so I can relate, especially to this as numbness is a sweet oblivion to pain)).I love the repeat of verse 2 and 4.You have such unique images and meanings here, and an excellent rhyme and flow-so natural,the meaning and feelings so very emotional and heartfelt and honest, it really affects one upon reading it..Excellent piece.

GaryJ

Wow awsome poem!! i liked it alot..a 5/5 for me!!

Awesome poem. Keep up the good work. And to answer your previous question, yes, i read every word of it, some sections twice. I don't just read them fast. I make sure i get everything in and then find the meaning in the poems. It was excellent and I enjoyed reading it all. Just like this one, great job.

I'm just a white clone
Wearing Death's cologne
Cute.