Time's Repeating {Monchielle}

by Natalie   Aug 13, 2006


Time's repeating once more,
Stuck between spider webs,
Caught by few drifting tears,
Dripping down walls of shame,
Reaching out to scarred fears.

Time's repeating once more,
Screeching deafening pleas,
For unknown helping hands,
Stained from releasing pain,
Which no one understands.

Time's repeating once more,
Wounds pray for forgiveness,
Bleeding an unknown curse,
Scarring more than true skin,
Pushed backwards in reverse.

Time's repeating once more,
Breaking down in vile ways,
Screaming in old key holes,
Wanting some caring friends,
Who'll help her aching soul.

August 13th 2006
Copyright © Natalie

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The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four
five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in
each verse. Each line within the stazas consist
of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme.
The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Hind

    Again amazing poem..5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Very interesting.. ''Times Repeating ..'' That is very true. I liked the emotion. Nicely done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    I like the way you have used language in this poem! please continure to write! and i will continue to read!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I guess my comments are like copies. But your poetry is original.
    5/5
    I like the desriptiveness of each poem ive read.
    each one seems perfect then you read another and it seems more then perfect.
    I cant remember if i already said but your in my favourites.
    ~emah

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Good poem..the flow was good a another 5/5 for me!!