Tortuous Tears [Cinquain]

by Jessica   Aug 17, 2006


Sobbing
Gently at night
Tears slowly pierce soft skin
Burning is my mind, and sliced is
My heart..
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CINQUAIN - Is a short, unrhymed poem that consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 lines.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Variance Severin Knight

    Its all good but it makes a little sense. i like it otherwise, keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    I like it alot very true to home

  • 17 years ago

    by Tyler

    Great poem, keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Awwwhh so sad. so beautiful and so amazingly good.
    YOUR A FANTASTIC WRITER!!

    much lovees.

    amberina**

  • 17 years ago

    by Aline

    U seem really shadowy in ur poems

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