Dont speak

by Sweet lig   Aug 22, 2006



Dont waste your saliva!
I dont need your explanations
You breath is like a ditch!
And stinky dirty creek
Better keep your mouth shut!
Than i smell your badly
And toxic breath!
Ear is deafen to hear your
Unbelievable words...
He he he its too funny!
Wish this is only a joke!

Dont act like an innocent child
You cant convinced me
To let you know, i was regretting
Coz i let you to enter in my life
Dont stare at me like you are begging
I told you, it is all getting too late
Dont you remember?
I had given you a lot of chance
But you only lost that chance!
Yeah! now you won!
I knew this is what you waited for long
Now i am letting you go and you are free

Sssh...... dont speak its better enough
Coz world are getting smelly
And i know you begin to make lies again
Its time for me to wake up!
Face the truth that you dont deserve
Every words you speak i felt you are killing me
So please... dont speak!
If you still want to respect
Despite of everything

Dont speak! dont speak! dont speak!
Its better enough for me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This one was okay... its sounds like you were kinda angery in this one with all of the exclamation points....but i think you should revise it a little..the flow was kinda off at times.. 4/5 on this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    It was very deep. It sounded as though you were pissed off when writing this. I like it, but it could've been written a little better. But because of the feeling you put into it, it deserves a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Damn, this was such a powerful poem. I felt the anger from this. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I sense anger in this poem. I like the tone in it. I can see that you really improve in writing.. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It really is wonderful. It's filled with so much anger and sadness. You have done a wonderful job with this one. You style is very unique. I just think that you should work on your spelling and that you should focus a little more on the rhythm because it is a bit off. Other then that I say excellent write. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

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