Their Perfect Suicide

by Death By Stereo   Aug 24, 2006


And in the end it's all the same
the beating heart will start to tame
and as the tub rapidly fills
the blood from her wrist slowly spills

her life ended suddenly today
as the reaper comes to take her away
it looks at her boyfriend with no glint in it's eye
he figures out what has happened and begins to sigh

he stumbles around and finds a pen
and at that very moment he figures out when
when, everything started to go in her life
then he believes the answer is his knife

he brings the blade to his wrist
of this action he does insist
to join at her side up above
and continue on with their endless love

the problem was he did not understand
of how it was not his time to leave this land
so he slashed down the middle once, then again
then fell to his knees and grabbed up the pen

as he falls over on the floor he will write
of how he did not give up the fight
but he did the second his wrists were slashed
and on both arms, too deeply gashed

they both lay there for a while on the floor
while their blood seeped together beneath the door
so they got their wish, together they ended
but the wounds they left for everyone else never mended

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    Omfg this is amazing you're an amazing writer keep up the good work

    my verdict def.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. that gave me serious chills. the descrpitions were amazing. good job. write more.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ali

    It was really good i didnt really get how the girl died. i maen i know she slit her wrists but did her boyfriend match her do it? and was her boyfriend alive when the reaper came and slit his wrists! well whatever it was still kick ass so i gave you a 5

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