RIP my best buddy

by Silent Screams   Sep 4, 2006


This poem is very short but i was trying to make it a quote at first but it was to long....this poem is for my best best best best best
friend that committed suicide in early august...please read and vote/comment on my poem and maybe some others..if you do I'll read and vote/comment on some of yours thanks so much
auna
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Everyone says your dead but your still in my head you stay in my head like an ever blowing chime you have a piece of my mind but you took my heart now it's with you in the grave
i want it back more and more every single day but i know that won't happen because your under ground
and i am above suffering with out your love
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RIP my lover,best friend....he was like a brother:(.......
auna

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Good poem i'am sorry for your lost
    but you can't use that pain to destoy
    yourself thats life. lost. we go on all of us. one day at a time. keep writting
    it makes the pain easier sharing with us.

    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by V a n i t y V e i n 6 9

    This is an awsome poem. I could relate to this a lot. Even now I still have a friend that is concidering suicide. But, that's not the point I'm trying to make. But good Work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ch!ld~of~Darkness

    It was sad, but i liked it...my friend commited suicide aswell. it really uset me and i felt like i wanted to die, but from her death i met a guy and fell in love, so i learned that with ecery death comes a life. And even though i mess her all the time, I would never of fallen in love, in a weird way, when she took her life, she gave me mine.
    Keep up the good work, if you wanna talk e-mail me
    plz vote and comment on my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ

    Hey this i so sad my aunt best friends comitted suicide at 13 and they all had her pic in there locker

    TRIPPY

    well anyways i have a new poem sorta diff then my others but yea

    -DEVIN (imma grl) :D

  • 17 years ago

    by skye

    Omg this is so good keep it up 5/5

    Sarah

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