Clouds Of Lies. {Tetractys}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Sep 6, 2006


-Clouds Of Lies.-

.................Clouds..........
.................Roll on.........
.........Through my eyes.....
..........Of sky to yours........
As I believe every lie you told me.

© Jenna Elphick
September 5, 2006

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Tetractys: is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10. You can make double Tetractys by a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. or a triple by 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10. and so on...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I liked it. i can relate i look at the cloud and think about things like this. excellent work. short yet powerful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Nicely done! I'm falling in love with your poetry now!! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great one, so nicely written and you said what you had to in it, perfect one