All Alone

by Sweet lig   Sep 7, 2006


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Life filled with fear
Eyes cried a million times
Mind bothered a lot of things
Heart full of wounds and pain
Unsolved problem
Tired and think to give up

Every long journey
Im all alone
Unfaithful friends
Smiling at my back
They only called me friend
To fill their own needs
Sadness in my face
You cant portray

Id tried so hard
To tell my self
That Ive been always
All alone
Whatever path I take
Admitting the fact
At the end...

I will die
All alone

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was a very sad, yet full of emotion poem. The flow was just amazing and the words you used fit just perfect. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too cliche; I like it.
    I suppose it's the fact that you have a way with words that gets me about your poetry; your describing is very good. Just stay away from the cliche poems is all I can say. =]
    Nicely done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so heartbreaking to read, and yet so elegantly written.
    The word choice was a joy to read, as was the whole poem, the depth and emotion behind the words really got to me, and the flow was good throughout.
    I loved the ending, it was very intense.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow thanks a lot for commenting this poem of mine! im really glad for the nice compliment, i truly appreciate it.. again thanks and keep on reading my poems god bless u all and thanksssss

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    This is a great poem, great use of words and flow. It isn't 'wordy' like poems tend to be, just straight to the point. 5/5 from me!

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