by Jessica Sep 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Slowly moving the black pen across the paper |
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Wow.......this poem is soo awsome!! a 5/5 for me.. |
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Bravo. Excellently done. The flow was a bit off at times but overall a wonderful write. |
by Sophie
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Good work jess. lovely poem! |
by Ye Seul
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Wow.. this is very interesting poem.. i havent tried any poems like this one.. it is very well written and your stanzas flew wonderfully.. it is very emotional also... great job!! |
by Tammie
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Woah thats amazing hun! Very deep and powerful. Your use of words is just wonderful. This is an excellent poem. Definately one of my favorites of yours! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more! =] 5/5 |