At The Gate.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Sep 13, 2006


-At The Gate.-

"Another summer has already come and gone."
He muttered under his breath at the edge of the pond,
As the sun slowly drifted along the top of the hills,
He sat shuttering from early falls chills.

Memories playing through his pounding mind,
Still feeling her fingers so tightly entwined.
And as tears started to trickle down his face,
He could still feel their final embrace.

The sky was black with a faint silver light,
Coming from the full moon that night.
Wolves were howling in the forest beyond the house,
And the final fire in his heart was doused.

Love alive in his eyes, he stood remembering hers,
With vodka dancing in his breath, his good-bye was slurred.
And the path was cascaded from footsteps filled with hate,
From the man who would never again go beyond the gate.

© Jenna Elphick
September 13, 2006.

- - The meaning of this poem, wasn't a lost love, it was a death. And she died after their first kiss and he never got over it, hence the reason it says man instead of boy near the end. It's kind of confusing, but yeah, that's the meaning of this. - -

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  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    "Another summer has already come and gone."
    He muttered under his breath at the edge of the pond,
    As the sun slowly drifted along the top of the hills,
    He sat shuttering from early falls chills.

    This was a trully perfect stanza. Absolutely loved it. The flow and imagery was wonderful. The whole poem was so well written.

    Thanks for entering it in my contest. Loved reading it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I love the descriptions in this poem. "Love alive in his eyes". Wow. I think it's wonderful hun, keep it up!

  • Wonderful poem...u have serious talent..i am bulimic and a (struggling day after day to get n stay clean) meth addict n my poems are about my addictions and self destructive tendencies...pretty deep stuff n if u would read and comment on sum of my stuff i would appreciate it.

    princess of self-detruction
    aka brittany

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not as good as the other one, definately, but I did like it. It held a lot of emotion, but I felt you could have put more imagery into it. Grand job, though.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5