Mom i can't take you anymore

by Silent Screams   Sep 22, 2006


M..my best friend
O..open to care not matter what
T..thinking of me and how much i mean to you and that i could be gone in a second
H..hugging me like i would die tomorrow
E..every time i cry you would be there to wipe away the blues
R..right beside me when i need you the most

thats the way my old mother was caring always putting me first always there to pick me up when i fell always there to save me from my hell but now that mother is gone lost forever

M..madness
O..over dose
T..tears
H..hate
E..eat more and more pills as if theres nothing to live for
R..riping smashing crashing as if she was a killer

this is what she is made now
anger madness i've gone insane
and you are to blame
you call yourself a mom
i call you a robot eat, more and more drugs fill yourself up
cause your all f.u.c.k.e.d. up
but no matter how many pills you pop..it ain't going to change a dam thing
you've done it this time
i can't take it anymore
you try to commit suicide right in front of my eyes
they say you live but in my eyes you are dead
never going to be rived
i guess this is my final
goodbye
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this poem is for my mom i know it isn't that good but it's what i feel
please vote/comment I'll return the favor... thanks so much
auna

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    Wow, Amazing poem. I can't believe I past by it before. Very good, full of strong emotions and very powerful writing. Interesting style, breaking in and out of acrostic and free form, you did it well. Its sad to hear you say that about your mom, I hope you are closer with her now. Keep up the good work and don't let writers block stop you from writing all together, you have an amazing talent and it would be a shame to see it put to waste.

    XOXOXOXOX
    I Love You,
    Chris

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost and Confused

    This is a very good and emotional poem! You really poured your heart into it. Very relatable also. I kow what it's like to have a mother not care and try to commit suicide and then try to act like everything is fine. Keep your head up. Don't live her life.
    Love ((Beautifully Forgotten))

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wow so deep i feel your pain keep writting its the only thing we can control

  • 17 years ago

    by Scream_my_name

    This poem was very good!!! omg i can't say i know how you feel but my mom does sometimes act like im not there. i feel so bad!! BE HAPPY FOR YOUR LIFE IS WORTH TEN OF OTHER PEOPLE'S BECAUSE YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris W.

    Very good. Nice to see someone using this style. Keep it up! And thank you for all your comments on my work.