I'll cry for your love till my wirsts bleed blue

by Silent Screams   Sep 25, 2006


Mommy,daddy
your little girls in pain
she's suffering all over again
cutting her wrist till they bleed blue
can't you see she's crying out for you
she calls your names no one answers
no one at all is there to help as she falls
your her mom your her dad
help her now
don't get mad
just hug her tight and tell her everything well be aright
her tears are washing away
all that sparkled bright
she's dreaming that you guys would hold her tight
all she wants is a little love
from you two
is that to much to ask
is it to hard to hold your own daughter who's screaming in pain
is that to much to ask
is it.....
sadly it is to much to ask
for this little girls family
has a dark past
full of anger and hate
they call her there biggest mistake
they push her farther, and farther away yet she keeps her hopes up..
that was her biggest mistake thinking that they would love her
all her hope is gone
now i sit in a corner
with the shiny knife
it is now the one that holds me tight but.....it never tells me that everything well be aright
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auna

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  • 16 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    Sounds like my family. Sadly.
    5 for excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Flying high*~

    Omg that is soo sad! it reminds of whats goin on with my friend! none the less AWESOME POEM!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kitty

    Great work! i realli enjoyed this poem ... keep up th good work...
    im sorri to hear about tht pain u go thru...
    kitty xoxox
    be strong...

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Great poem! There is sooo much emotion in it----amazing....There are some grammatical errors and at some points the flow is a little choppy, but for the most part, it's perfect! Keep it up and Stay Strong!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris W.

    Thank you for your comment about my school shooting poem. Im working on a part two. In the first their are a lot of questions. In part 2 they will be answered. When i wrote the first part i based it off the first news reports that came out the day of the shooting. They had no reasons for why the man did it. So when i read later reports, which gave reasons (or answers), i realized i could either delete the first and write a new one or write a sequel answering my or our questions about why the man did it. I should have it done tommorow or the next day, i hope. I dont know if you have read the latest reports about the case, but ill warn you that it only makes it worse and a lot more sad, and especially sickening. Let me know what you think.

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