by Nelle Sep 25, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Why did you leave me here to fall? |
by LostForever
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Its good keep it up! x |
by Misstress
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I like how you started this poem with a question, |
by Darien
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This was a pretty good poem Nelle. Not one of your better ones, but it was still good. Very strong and straight to the point type poem. Keep writing, and keep smiling. |
by Autuumnbree
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Very good poem and the rhyming was |
by LadyPearl
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Great job. Very straightforward and clear. Be independent. Though between the 2nd and the 3rd stanza, I was a bit confused because the storyline changed suddenly. |