Broken Home

by disturbed one   Sep 29, 2006


This is a true story about someone i know and shes having a really rough time dealing with her parents divorce and tonight i never saw someone that is not bi-polar break down so quickly...she walked outside for like 2 mins came in balling then like 20 mins later was laughing again...but anyways it got my mind goin so heres the result...

The rules arent the same,
Its all so wrong,
Everytime Im reminded,
I think of a sad song,

Mom is strict,
Dad is great,
Why is my life,
So full of hate,

I sit and cry wondering,
When will it end,
I realize the answer is never,
Its a secret I cannot defend,

I hate seeing them together,
Its makes me upset,
This house is a broken home,
Its something I wont ever forget

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Cuz im loved

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Why the hell are you so popular on here, huh?

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ya thanks evil...but i dont think there is a way to edit it is there?

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I just read it again and i just want to suggest taking the "ever" out of the last line--- i think that might flow better! Keep writing!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Another wonderfully written poem! Great job! def 5/5

    xoxo
    -xxEvilAngelxx-