Snow. {Lantern.}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 7, 2006


-Snow.-

------------Snow,
---------Flakes are,
--------Painting the,
---Autumn colored leaves,
-----------White.

© Jenna Elphick
October 6, 2006

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Lantern: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought it was great but i agree with catherine, this line has got 5 syllables. but great writing, 5/5

    Autumn colored leaves

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    :) painted a picture in my mind darling

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    I think the 4th line has 5 syllabales, not 4?

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I didnt know these types of poems existed i dont know much about the different types of poetry i just stick to basics i think maybe il try one some day xxx alexxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

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