The legend within ...........

by Shriya   Oct 7, 2006


I go camping
and what do i see
i see a legend
a legend about me

when campers sing their songs
and dancers dance in the light
i pick up the legend
and it screams with delight

both filled with fantasy and horror
my heart stuck in my throat
only one thing to desribe it
it makes hell float in ur view

read it u will die
see it u will be ill
skim through it u will faint
throw it u r cursed

this legend of mine
makes u faint all the time
i do not know
but it will let u go

i hate stuff like this
why is my legend tattered
because what my legend tells u
is all about death

my mom was a killer
and so was my dad
my 88 sisters
were all brats

i alone will defeat them
that is what legend says
for now i have floated
out of my world and into god's

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    YOYOYO,shriya banerji i love this poem alot i admire it becasue it show what your mind actaully thinks this could make a real legend LOL.
    Exellent discription and great way of rythmes i hope you have more exiting poem exactually like this but even better.
    Keep trying to make more adventure poems. My god,lol, you really know you texture of poems you write.
    Shriya i love your poems so much the mean alot to me mainly beacsue your my bestfriend and i hope you will always remember me,next time you want me to read your poems dont comment mine and tell me CALL ME!!!
    xoxroxyxox aka your dearest frined emilyyy pukasssss lol!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    The poem was AMAZING!!!! Your comments mean a lot to me. Keep writing... you are SOOOOOO talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like this poem it has good flow. shanik